The One Who Stayed Behind
Some Doors Open Inward. None, open back.
The Evening That Felt Wrong
The evening wore a shade I’d never seen before.
As if the sky itself were hiding something more.
The wind was there, yet not a single leaf would sway.
Like every tree had held its breath and chose to stay.
I walked the street where once, as boys, we used to run.
The same old walls, the stones still warm from years of sun,
The same cracked paths, the same old lamppost, cold and bare
But every soul had vanished, left just empty air.
The house still stood, the way old broken things will do
Its door hung open wide, like it had waited too.
I paused, I breathed, I lifted up my trembling feet
And why I stepped inside—that answer, I’ll never meet.
Inside — Where Time Had Chosen Not To Move
The floor was thick with years of dust and slow decay
But one strange patch was clean — as if swept just today.
As if a figure rose from there and walked away
And left that single spotless mark to help me stray.
Upon the wall, a picture hung in wooden frame.
The glass was cracked, the edges dark, the colors tame
A child inside it, smiling wide without a care,
I leaned in close to see the face beyond the glare.
And then the face looked back.
I turned away, I blinked, I told myself to breathe.
I looked again—the smile was gone beneath the frame’s dark wreath.
The child was no longer smiling at some distant place
The child was pointing, slowly, straight toward my face.
The Staircase That Spoke In Creaks
I knew I should not go up, knew it in my bones.
Yet both my feet kept climbing, moving on their own.
The staircase groaned beneath me like a thing in pain.
Or maybe it was something else that groaned again.
With every step I took, I heard another fall
A second set of footsteps echoing the hall.
I stopped — they stopped. I moved; they moved right close behind.
I didn’t look. Some things are safer left unlined.
Above, a door stood shut, sealed tight from deep inside,
Yet underneath its frame, a ribbon of light pried.
A soft and silver glow leaked slowly through the crack
And in that house with no electricity, no wires, no track.
The Room—That Should Have Never Opened
The door swung wide on its own.
Inside, a single chair sat placed upon the floor.
A figure in it, hunched and facing from the door.
His head bent low, his shoulders still, no breath, no sound
I called to him. My voice just fell without a rebound.
I stepped across the room; I reached and touched his shoulder
The flesh beneath my fingers is stone and dead and colder.
I turned him slowly, gripping tight with shaking hands
And stared into my own face.
My eyes were shut, my lips were curled into that grin
The same one that the child had worn within the frame of tin.
My skin was pale, my chest was still, no rise, no fall
My body sat there waiting, propped against the wall.
The Run That Led Me Nowhere
I ran. I hit the stairs and stumbled, gasping, down.
I burst through doors and hit the street and crossed the town.
I breathed the open air and pressed my back to stone —
Outside at last, no longer trapped, no longer alone.
The street had people. Moving, talking, living things.
I grabbed a man and shouted—nothing. No one clings.
He walked right through me, like I was made of smoke and air.
I reached out for a woman—my hand found nothing there.
I turned back slowly, knowing, dreading what I’d find
The house still stood. The door is still open. Light still lined
The upper window, glowing soft in dying night,
And in the room, the chair is now empty in the light.
The Truth At The End
Because I never left.
I never crossed that threshold, never hit the stair,
I never ran through streets or breathed the open air.
The thing that fled the house, that walked among the crowd
That wasn’t me. It wore my face, but wrong and loud.
I am the one who stayed behind inside that room
Still sitting in that chair inside that quiet tomb.
Still cold. Still, still. Still wearing that familiar grin.
Waiting for the next one,
foolish enough,
to walk in.


The descriptions are vividly disturbing. They can linger inside readers' head. Your writing is great!
OMG 😦
Safia i just imagined this in real and could feel the jitters 😨😨😨😨
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