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syntaxevasion's avatar

"Rain wrote your name"

as no poem ever will,

no title ever can

forever now were the same,

as you poured from past,

before pine grew as name,

in green old tree fell fast,

a river ran grey.

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

It’s one of those poems that feels like it catches you off guard. The rain becomes this strange mirror that brings back someone you thought you’d finally learned to live without. I felt that moment when memory slips in even with the curtains closed — that’s exactly how it works. The images are so familiar: the room too small, the night too big, the kind of sadness that rises quietly inside you. What hit me hardest was the idea of the fire speaking a name you’re trying not to say. That felt painfully true. And the ending — storms made of unfinished love — stayed with me long after I finished reading. It’s the kind of poem that leaves you sitting there for a moment, feeling like someone just described a feeling you’ve never managed to put into words.

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